ext_109135 ([identity profile] nobu.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ursula 2004-02-01 01:53 am (UTC)

Re:

i suppose the second to last line can refer to the anal sex... but it isn't really a leap people might make easily, so if that is what you meant, and there are only the mother and father... then you should tie that closer together perhaps...
i can see it being a fucked up love poem if you take the speaker as using the mother and father as an example in order to talk him/herself out of loving the subject of the last line... then the "anyway" and last line make sense...

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