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Ursula ([personal profile] ursula) wrote2008-10-09 06:17 pm
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My poem "To Seek Her Fortune" is live at Goblin Fruit.

[identity profile] nobu.livejournal.com 2008-10-10 03:56 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely. I like the final draft.

[identity profile] nobu.livejournal.com 2008-10-10 07:28 am (UTC)(link)
Also, i don't know if you recall (or if I ever told you) but I wrote a response to your poem, long ago.

I screen my calls, which I always swore never to do
but we promised much in that age of iron and steel.
When we parted I vowed I'd find you
setting my silver blade into the bark.

I lied.
I walk toward the window, aimless,
staring at garbage-cans, pink buildings, a pale sky.
I can feel you waiting, hear you breathing across the cables.
Somewhere, the blood runs down the tree.

[identity profile] reasie.livejournal.com 2008-10-10 02:56 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY!

*throws rose petals*

[identity profile] reasie.livejournal.com 2008-10-10 02:58 pm (UTC)(link)
okay, now I actually read it. Very pretty. *clap clap clap*

[identity profile] tejolote.livejournal.com 2008-10-10 05:22 pm (UTC)(link)
This is a beautiful lift to my whole day.

[identity profile] belmanoir.livejournal.com 2008-10-13 11:47 pm (UTC)(link)
that poem is FANTASTIC.

[identity profile] belmanoir.livejournal.com 2008-10-13 11:47 pm (UTC)(link)
ps can i link it from my journal?