djinn and chimpanzees

[ursula]

ashfae made an offhand comment about the impossibility of writing melodramatic cathartic poetry about djinn and monkeys. Of course, this means I felt compelled to try.


A little ways before the beginning
we were chimpanzees mostly, picking fleas
and lice and twigs from limbs and pelts,
saying hello, goodbye and also
please I like you will you look after me have a nice day
with a simple handjob for a small pink dick.

A little ways after the beginning,
God said, Look, see what We have made,
This is Man; and he made the angels bow
and also the djinn bowed tight under red wax seal
though they were smoke and fire.

That's what we do now, we put fire
into bottles, fire into lamps, crushed
tight under the breastbone so we don't remember
how to say hello goodbye I love you
Embrace is awkward smashed against your rib
and touch impossible invisible I have
a crystal coffin.

Comments

[ashfae.livejournal.com]

Writing about genuine angst is very tricky. But yes, I liked your poem very much. =)

[ursula]

Yay!

Have you read the AS Byatt short story about djinn?

[ashfae.livejournal.com]

It was the inspiration for my djinn poem, actually; I dedicated it to her in a desperate attempt to not appear too plagerizing. *sheepish gryn*

[ursula]

Just pretend you're too postmodern for plagiarism to count ;)